Sunday, January 13, 2008

ODE

Written by Me:

Ode...

When you've done some walking in my shoes
come find me, feel free, seek
then you might be allowed opinion
and be permitted an attempt to speak

I'm the one who lives my life
yes I've always just been me
your attitude, impressions, perceptions
are so far from reality

Just focus on your puppet strings
and keep silently in time
Clean your filthy fingers
before you point them at me and mine

Please, a moment peering through my eyes
before you tell me how to see
Live and let live, dear 'Jesus'
B - B - B and LET BE

When you can create a universe
in merely seven days
then maybe you can be free to judge
or be allowed words about my ways

Your hypocrisy don't touch my soul
because I'm the only one who has to know

What I am, and can do and should be
last time I checked, was every inch Me.

Before you try to force
my head into a bow
double check your own name plate
as Only God can Judge me now!

7 comments:

Blondie said...

Wow... very powerful.
I'd love to know what sparked the writing of such a piece.

You're talented, to say the least.

Jay said...

WOW! Is right! Very awesome stuff!

FOUR DINNERS said...

Double WOW!!!

Put it to music?

Record it?

Send me a copy?

Please?

xxx

R.E.H. said...

Strong and powerful. I, like Blondie, wonder what lay behind this writing today ;)

awa said...

I love that!!! Do you mind if I post this on my blog providing credit and a linky to you of course! :)

Speedcat Hollydale said...

I agree with the rest of these comments and would like to know what brought on these feelings. Is this a testament to others, or to religion? I must know!

-and, did you get rid of your backround, or is my old computer cra**** out again?

Hello from Speedy ... I too am catching up :-)
Hope your week is full of happiness and surprises.

JINKS said...

Jackie,
Best I've seen yet....reiki on with yo bad self.....jinks.